Wednesday, December 09, 2009

The Bothersome Chimney :)

Just wanted to share a story that Mary Alice wrote today for an English assignment. She is such a silly girl! Also... Underlining titles is something that I can't figure out how to do on Blogger, so just pretend that the title is underlined instead of in bold.

The Bothersome Chimney

(by Mary Alice Smith)

Katie was a very sweet girl who played basketball,was Beth in a play, and was home schooled.

One clear morning, Katie was sweeping the ashes at her house.

She was also cleaning the chimney so she leaned up the chimney to clean it. When she tried to get out, her hair was stuck in the chimney!

"Help! Help! Help!" she cried.

The house was silent.

"Mom, please come help me!" she said. "Oh yeah, Mom's shopping," said Katie. (not to mention that Katie was thirteen years old and old enough to stay at the house by herself.)

Just then, she heard footsteps. "Oh yahoo! It's Emily!" said Katie.

Emily said, "Katie! Poor you! You look like you've been robbed!"

"Now, Emily, " said Katie, "Please just get me loose!"

"Okay." said Emily. "There."

And that night the two girls had a sleep over.

The End


This is an initial draft. We will spend the rest of the week revising and publishing. I thought it was pretty funny! The bothersome chimney! Indeed!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

That is hilarious! What a funny and creative girl she is... sweet Mary Alice.

-Tessa

Alisha Stewart said...

I think we have a budding author on our hands:)

Miranda said...

Hehe...